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Puppetmaster Saikitsu - Pg 05 by Rah-Chan Puppetmaster Saikitsu - Pg 05 by Rah-Chan
:D

Sorry that it's not colored. I'm going to start posting the lineart with the text and then when I get to about 120 pages, I'm going to tone everything.

So this will have to do for now.

-EDIT 2-
Sketchy problem FIXED

-EDIT 1-
OMG I just realized that I forgot to hide the sketch layers so it shows really bad in panel 1 and 5. D:
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:iconmagnumphoenixzx:
MagnumPhoenixZX Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Heh heh...Run, Lt, run!
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Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol. :D

FFFF I still need to draw the next page. D:
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MagnumPhoenixZX Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
True...
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Curaxuyon Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
well, your backgrounds still need attention, your anatomy is fairly right...
the boobs of lt.himiko, are they right in the large picture?
you are better than me with facial expressions, haha.
also, sai's arm and mecha pieces aren't vey convincing to me. yo are good, but only putting metal plates with nails is not yet that what it needs to be. overall, it's looking okay, even tough it's not a professional one yet (still farther than mine T_T)
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Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I have been getting really lazy lately. I know I'm not good at backgrounds and I'm working on that. It's really hard to do good art when you're as depressed as me.


And her arms are patchwork mechanical prosthetics that they made in the military to make due and she hasn't gotten it fixed.
I designed her the way I like, thank you very much, and I'll keep it that way.

I'm just jotting everything down to get the story. You're looking too far into this. I have better looking manga on paper but I have no scanner.
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Curaxuyon Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
wel, it was just a critique, and if that's how you designed her, that too is fine.
i didn't say it looked bad, did i?
and abour backrounds; i majorly suck too...
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Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah well... There's always room for improvement.

And not to say I'm not working on backgrounds I'm just more concerned with the story.

Considering they're in a ship and everything is pretty much straight lines and corridors... I don't think that it sucks so bad.

If you've ever played Xenosaga then you'd know how the Woglinde looked on the inside.
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:iconcuraxuyon:
Curaxuyon Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
never played...
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Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay then.
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KleinKiessling Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
UHUHUHUH
THE BOOOBIEZ LOL
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