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Puppetmaster Saikitsu - Pg 05 by Rah-Chan Puppetmaster Saikitsu - Pg 05 by Rah-Chan
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Sorry that it's not colored. I'm going to start posting the lineart with the text and then when I get to about 120 pages, I'm going to tone everything.

So this will have to do for now.

-EDIT 2-
Sketchy problem FIXED

-EDIT 1-
OMG I just realized that I forgot to hide the sketch layers so it shows really bad in panel 1 and 5. D:
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:iconmagnumphoenixzx:
MagnumPhoenixZX Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Heh heh...Run, Lt, run!
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol. :D

FFFF I still need to draw the next page. D:
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:iconmagnumphoenixzx:
MagnumPhoenixZX Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True...
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Curaxuyon Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
well, your backgrounds still need attention, your anatomy is fairly right...
the boobs of lt.himiko, are they right in the large picture?
you are better than me with facial expressions, haha.
also, sai's arm and mecha pieces aren't vey convincing to me. yo are good, but only putting metal plates with nails is not yet that what it needs to be. overall, it's looking okay, even tough it's not a professional one yet (still farther than mine T_T)
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Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I have been getting really lazy lately. I know I'm not good at backgrounds and I'm working on that. It's really hard to do good art when you're as depressed as me.


And her arms are patchwork mechanical prosthetics that they made in the military to make due and she hasn't gotten it fixed.
I designed her the way I like, thank you very much, and I'll keep it that way.

I'm just jotting everything down to get the story. You're looking too far into this. I have better looking manga on paper but I have no scanner.
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:iconcuraxuyon:
Curaxuyon Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
wel, it was just a critique, and if that's how you designed her, that too is fine.
i didn't say it looked bad, did i?
and abour backrounds; i majorly suck too...
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah well... There's always room for improvement.

And not to say I'm not working on backgrounds I'm just more concerned with the story.

Considering they're in a ship and everything is pretty much straight lines and corridors... I don't think that it sucks so bad.

If you've ever played Xenosaga then you'd know how the Woglinde looked on the inside.
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:iconcuraxuyon:
Curaxuyon Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
never played...
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay then.
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:iconkleinkiessling:
KleinKiessling Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
UHUHUHUH
THE BOOOBIEZ LOL
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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:iconthesolwing:
TheSolWing Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
wow even in this futurte guys cannot stop talking about boobs XP
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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:iconmoonlitcrescent:
MoonlitCrescent Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
Now THAT is more what I was expecting :lol:

:laughing: Wear clothes like that, you'd better expect it... besides, wasn't that a compliment?
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
XD LMAO.

They love each other secretly.... SHHHHH.
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:iconmoonlitcrescent:
MoonlitCrescent Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
Hahahaha. Yep.

Ok :shh: Seriously though, isn't it a compliment??
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah.
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:iconmoonlitcrescent:
MoonlitCrescent Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
So why be all death stare? :iconwonderingplz:
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
She doesn't take it like that. She just sees him being a perv.

Taht's all she sees.

Just read and find out with page 7 on how she feels
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MoonlitCrescent Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
Of course; love-hate that was never meant to be :crying:

Is that all he's being?

Of course, I most certainly will...
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
No they both love each other but they won't admit it... at least not yet.

XD
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zeroknight07 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
lol
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:iconzetachi:
Zetachi Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
Very nice page! Especially Himiko's glare of absolute DEATH. I wouldn't want to get on her bad side.
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! Yes, Himiko can get violent. Let's just say she a war veteran, although not really....just that she REALLY knows what she's doing. XD

She's....adept in the ways of killing.
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:iconknightmere:
Knightmere Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
I LOVE THIS GUY ALREADY. :iconrainbowheartplz: :iconexcitedlaplz:
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
XD

:iconexcitedplz:

Btway did you know this icon is actually from FACEBOOK? LE GASP.

XD I cracked up.
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:iconknightmere:
Knightmere Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
:iconlegaspplz:

FACEBOOK IS THE BIBLE OF THE INTERNET. :iconexcitedplz:
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lmao. BIBLE. XDDD

I thought that was wikipedia or DictionaryObscura.

Where all the obscure and strange stories are told.
XD
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Knightmere Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
They could very well be.

I just call Facebook the bible of the internet because a friend's mum said it, if it's not on Facebook then it's not true. She said that when she figured out that Adam Lambert had a concert near us but Facebook said nothing about it. XD

She was so disappointed. =(
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lmao So now she doesn't think that? XDDDDD

That's an odd way of thinking of it....

It's like the whole:

PICSORITDIDN'THAPPEN thing. XD
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:iconknightmere:
Knightmere Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
I always use the PICSORITDIDN'THAPPEN thing. XD
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
LMAO OH GOD.

You better not do that to me...

Don't make me set up a camera when we make love. Cause between you and me we KNOW we do it. ~~~<3
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Sero-Cheat Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
nice
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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Sero-Cheat Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
:D
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:iconwarmenx:
Warmenx Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
That guy should be smacked. lol
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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:iconamerican-israeli:
American-Israeli Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
Oh Wow! I love it :D :D :D She gave Lieutenant commander the cold shoulder :D yaaaayyyyyy :clap: go Sai :boogie:
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Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
She didn't give him the cold shoulder. And it wasn't Sai. It was Himiko. Himiko is the one with the big boobs and she gave him the death glare. Sai just proceeded on with business.
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American-Israeli Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
Well go Himiko then :boogie:
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE Lt. Cdr. BECAUSE he has a relationship with Himiko. They both want each other but they won't admit it at all.
So there's always this tension between them. A love-hate relationship more or less.


So you should be saying go Toya for admitting his feelings to a degree.
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:iconamerican-israeli:
American-Israeli Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
Well as long as it isn't with Sai then I'm happy :D
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You're strange....

Why? Why does it matter?
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:iconamerican-israeli:
American-Israeli Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
You just said why :D
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:iconhushaby-monster:
hushaby-monster Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010   Artist
This page is awesome. :XD:
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lmao. Thanks.
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:iconhushaby-monster:
hushaby-monster Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010   Artist
You're welcome. ^.^

I really like this so far. Keep up the great work!
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! Will do! :)
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